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Just Yesterday

Just yesterday you were holding my hand,

Just yesterday you gave me a wedding band,

Just yesterday you said I do and,

Just yesterday you said you loved me too.



Just yesterday you told me you cared,

Just yesterday you told me about the love we shared,

Just yesterday you said you’d never leave and,

Just yesterday that was all I needed to believe.


Just yesterday you were near,

Just yesterday they told me something I did’nt want to hear,

Just yesterday they buried you deep and,

Just yesterday thoughts of you kept me from sleep.


Just yesterday I finally came to see you,

Just yesterday I missed you more than I usually do and,

Just yesterday I remembered again how much I need you.

Just yesterday has come and gone and,

Just yesterday is just a memory of all that went wrong.

~Cary King
a.k.a.-StuzAngel-stuman.quadrent.net/
This Isn't about anyone In Particular. Just about how things end up different then what you want them to.
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starst Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
I love this, all of it and every part of it
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Coupdeplume Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
This is so perfectly beautiful and tragic. The repetitive wording makes it easy to see how the days blend and get lost when you lose someone special.. Amazing job.
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liltreede Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
=/
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autumleaf826 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww at 1st i culd only c tha 1st part thtz so so so so so so sad
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Absolfreak Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
awww how beautiful!!!
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shadougeluvertubi Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010
i like it
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VisualKitten-Designs Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
So emotional, I love it.
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lovesoranges Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
This is so beautiful and powerful!!
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Chi-town-girl-51-52 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Brovo
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simongirl Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Just stunning
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omg that made me cry
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BillysticZiploc Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
beautiful
and sad! great work
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animelove30 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010
awww.... I totally relate!!
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AlayAmay Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010
This is really touching. I love it.
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Alexandria-Cortex Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, this is just so beautiful.
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Labbonno Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Professional Writer
beautiful, just love it.:heart:
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millert Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
Lovely work. ;(
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Black-Flute Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
D: that is amazing and very strong.... love it but... :( lol x
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ZeraZombie Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010
D:


<3
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BatCup Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Very strong. In fact, I have a character in my story that died on her wedding day. This expresses that same emotion. Very nice.
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silentangelofhope Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww.... :heart:
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ver0nica24 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
That made me feel sad, but nice :) This poem is really good :D
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LivingAFantasy Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great poem... I love the way the words conveyed so much emotion...
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KGameLover1 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
WAAAOOOWWW!!! Great!! I LOVE IT!
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DeathsSympathy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
This made me lshed a single tear. :( most painful tear I ever shed because of a poem ever.
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fangurls101 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Wow.. that's.. deep.
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PabloPastulio Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great piece dude! it flows nicely!
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Pr1ttyKitty Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
I love the way the poem flows both repetition and a narrative through the stanzas. A good build up of emotions. I liked it :)
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Hungary-nee-chan Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice
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Raivere-chan Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Really well thought out and touching! <3
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Essenique Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very powerful and full of emotion! I like how you lead up to where you can tell it's going to be something sad and then all the sudden he's being buried! I wasn't expecting that! Great job!
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EccentricArrow Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Student Writer
beautiful but depressing.....
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FairyOcarina Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
So sad....need a hug... :hug:
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ll-Hidden-ll Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Student General Artist
he dies!!! T>T
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dreamer97 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
very lovely <3
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Moonwing902 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010   Traditional Artist
Oh that's so sad :'(
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DmitraBlue Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Gorgeous!
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unknownvizard Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful and sad, I love it
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lovelife99 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
So touching... *sniffle*
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XXSaturnNinjaSGXX Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is beautiful. :heart:
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leocale Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
beautiful!
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Monofilament-NS Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
That is such magnetic lines; emotionally provoking. Well done!
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GreendayIllusions Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
wow, i wish tat i could right like yew, i honour yew!
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Areina-chan Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
that was sad but really good
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Chivi-chan Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
This poem is very sad. ):
I love this.
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DreamCreator77 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i loved this poem.
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katie0607kitty Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010   Writer
I really love this <3
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cobrastarfan123 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
so sad
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TITANcheetah001 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
*Sigh* I love the poem. But it's so sad... :(
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ArcaneAngel0711 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
beautiful..simply wonderful
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